Dear {Name},
Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript for {Title}. What a distinctive voice and intriguing story! I enjoy being a development editor for writers such as yourself.
I did find several areas that would benefit from revisions, and have attached an editorial letter as well as copy of your book with line edits noted using the "track changes" feature.
I look forward to taking a second pass after you've revised. Per our contract, {dollar amount} remains of my {amount} fee, and I can accept payment via PayPal, Venmo, or personal check.
Sincerely,
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